Complete BrandScript Examples
This file contains full BrandScript examples across different industries to demonstrate how the 7-part framework applies in various contexts.
Example 1: Lawn Care Company
Character (Hero): Homeowners who want a beautiful, healthy lawn
Problem:
- External: Lawn is full of weeds, brown patches, and looks terrible
- Internal: Embarrassed when neighbors or guests see the yard; feel like a failure at homeownership
- Philosophical: You shouldn't have to choose between a beautiful yard and spending time with family
- Villain: Time-consuming yard work and confusing lawn care information
Guide:
- Empathy: "We understand how frustrating it is to spend every weekend working on your lawn without seeing results"
- Authority: "With 15 years of experience and over 2,000 satisfied customers, we know exactly what your lawn needs to thrive"
Plan:
- Schedule a free lawn assessment
- We create a customized treatment plan for your specific lawn
- Enjoy a lush, green lawn that makes your neighbors jealous
Call to Action:
- Direct: "Schedule Your Free Lawn Assessment"
- Transitional: "Download: The 5 Biggest Lawn Care Mistakes Homeowners Make"
Success:
- Have the best-looking lawn in the neighborhood
- Spend weekends with family instead of doing yard work
- Feel proud when guests arrive
Failure:
- Continue wasting money on products that don't work
- Lawn gets worse, property value decreases
- Miss out on precious family time
Example 2: Business Consultant
Character (Hero): Small business owners who want to grow their revenue
Problem:
- External: Stuck at a revenue plateau, can't seem to break through
- Internal: Feeling overwhelmed, uncertain about next steps, worried about business survival
- Philosophical: Running a business shouldn't mean sacrificing your health and relationships
- Villain: Lack of clear strategy and accountability
Guide:
- Empathy: "We know what it's like to feel stuck in your business while watching competitors grow past you"
- Authority: "Our clients average 67% revenue growth in the first year. We've helped 200+ businesses break through their plateaus"
Plan:
- Book a free 30-minute strategy session
- We'll create a custom 90-day growth roadmap
- Implement proven systems to scale sustainably
Success:
- Break through your revenue plateau
- Build systems that let you work less while earning more
- Create the business and life you always wanted
Failure:
- Stay stuck at your current revenue
- Continue feeling overwhelmed and burnt out
- Watch competitors leave you behind
Key Patterns to Notice
- Internal problems are emotional - embarrassment, frustration, anxiety, stress
- Philosophical problems elevate the message - "shouldn't have to choose," "deserve better"
- Villains are root causes, not symptoms - "time-consuming work," not "weeds"
- Success is aspirational and specific - "best-looking lawn," not just "nice yard"
- Plans are simple and clear - always 3 steps, easy to understand
- Both CTAs are present - one to buy, one to engage
- Empathy + Authority = Trust - both elements always present